- I couldn’t believe what I was seeing. beautiful brown locks flowing through the wind, As she walked towards me it was like an angel coming down from heaven coming to pick me up. She was Breathtaking.
I feel like its incomplete and not good enough and it could be improved in a lot of ways.
I learnt about sentence styles.
This was epicly epic Louise! The sentence that you wrote was absolutely amazing and you did a great job with your description in such a short amount of time. Advice for next time would be to include a short introduction about what you were doing. Keep the great workup!
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